For a Lady Who Desired Me to Show Affection

Given that you granted me consent to love,
How will you respond?
Will I your mirth, or passion stir,
When I commence pursue;
Do you torment, or scorn, or love me too?

Every minor beauty can reject, and I
Spight of your aversion
Absent your leave can observe, and succumb;
Bestow a grander Destiny!
It's simple to destroy, you can fashion.

Then grant me consent to love, & adore me too
Not with design
To raise, as Loves cursed defiers behave
As puling Bards whine,
Renown to their charm, from their weeping eyes.

Sorrow is a pond and mirrors not clear
Thy charm's lights;
Joyes are clear streams, your vision seem
Gloomy in sadder layes,
Within joyful numbers they shine brilliant with acclaim.

Which shall not refer to portray you lovely
Injuries, fires, and shafts,
Gales in your countenance, traps in your locks,
Corrupting all your parts,
Either to betray, or torment trapped souls.

I shall cause your eyes like dawn stars seem,
Just as mild, and fayr;
Thy countenance as crystal even, and transparent,
While your unkempt hayr
May stream like a tranquil Area of the Air.

Abundant Nature's treasury (which is the Writer's Wealth)
I shall use, to embellish
Thy graces, if your Source of Delight
In equall appreciation
One but unlock, so we one another favor.

Delving into the Poem's Motifs

The work examines the relationship of passion and admiration, in which the narrator speaks to a maiden who seeks his devotion. Instead, he proposes a mutual exchange of artistic admiration for intimate pleasures. This phraseology is refined, blending polished norms with direct utterances of desire.

Through the verses, the writer spurns typical themes of unreturned passion, including grief and weeping, arguing they dim true charm. He favors delight and praise to emphasize the lady's features, vowing to depict her vision as radiant stars and her locks as flowing atmosphere. The approach highlights a practical yet skillful view on connections.

Key Elements of the Composition

  • Shared Exchange: The work focuses on a offer of tribute in trade for enjoyment, emphasizing parity between the individuals.
  • Spurning of Conventional Ideas: The speaker disparages usual artistic devices like grief and metaphors of anguish, preferring upbeat depictions.
  • Creative Craftsmanship: The use of diverse line measures and cadence demonstrates the poet's proficiency in composition, creating a fluid and engaging read.
Rich Nature's hoard (which is the Poet’s Wealth)
I shall spend, to adorn
Your charms, if your Source of Pleasure
With matching appreciation
You but release, so we each other bless.

The stanza captures the essential arrangement, as the author promises to use his creative gifts to celebrate the woman, as compensation for her receptiveness. The language blends spiritual hints with worldly yearnings, providing depth to the verse's message.

Stephen Ali
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